Another guide to Mepis

Hi everybody!
I'm fairly new to mepis, but have been using Linux for a few years. After talking with a lot of my friends, I decided that I needed a guide with clear and concise instructions that was light enough on paper and ink that I wouldn't feel bad giving it away. I've only been working on this for about a week, but as per the "release early and often" spirit of open-source, I decided to post here and see if anyone found this useful for themselve. Eventually, it might be nice to have pictures like Mr. Bass's great tutorial, and a possible permanent host.
I've not gotten a Domain Name yet, and really just wanted to get this out as soon as possible for critique and suggestions. Hope somebody besides me finds a use for this.
http://24.8.80.237/index.html